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September
24, 2000
Here are the essays of three students. The subject was "My Vacation":
My Vacation by Barnabas Drew 
For my vacation I had to go to a play club every day except Saturday
and Sunday cos my mum is working. I went there last year as well so I
was hoping that some of the friends I made would be there again. The first
day I was a bit scared meeting everyone again but once I was there for
a few days I was really enjoying it. The friends I played with most were
ronald , david , sean, paul , micheal and ivan. if it was sunny we usually
played things like hide and seek , where someone would count to 100 and
we would all run and do a big dive into the long grass , or chasie where
we would run all morning , or football or rounders.Inside we could play
the computer draw or play board games . Sometimes we were running about
inside shouting and wrestleing and then the lady in charge would start
shouting at us which was quite scarey and I didnt know where to
look and then we would look at each other and make faces at each other
when she wasnt looking . She was usually nice except when she was
shouting though. One time a couple of bigger boys had these guns that
shot sponge bullets and they were going round shooting us in the head
, so we would fall down dead and then get up after 20 seconds .Once I
got shot in the head then my friend sean got shot and he waved me over
so I crawled slowly along the floor on my belly like I could hardly move
so I could be dead next to him.Once we went on a big trip to an amazing
play park which had walkways up in the sky and climbing frames and a huge
slide .It was raining nearly all day but we didnt care we just ran
and ran and ran .I was so sad when the holiday was over cos I wont get
to see any of my friends . I hope I can go back next year .
The end
My Vacation by Sean Wilkins 
In June, I went down to Colorado Springs and spent a day with a friend
of mine. We then went up north to Denver and walked around a bit and ate
at subermine shop. We also went swimming at the lake and looked around
the street mall enjoying the street performers fest checking out the music
stores.
In July, I went to Kansas to see another friend of mine. I got to see
Fort Leavenworth which is an army post. We also saw X-Men and Mission
Impossible 2. We also checked out some toy and music stores in the local
mall. We played arcade games. We also walked through a forest looking
at the trees. We also rented a few videos like Spawn, The Crow: City of
Angels, and Blade. I really had a great time and I think he did too.
In August, I went back to the old neighborhood and spent some time with
my old friends before I moved to Glenwood to attend school there. We played
a few games of soccer and went swimming at the community pool. We also
got some ice cream at the ice cream store and played some games at the
arcade.
The rest of the times I did in-between these things is hang out with
my friends from Glenwood school. We went swimming a lot and sometimes
just did nothing. We would look at the clouds during the day and stars
at night.
Yeah, I would have to say it was a great summer. Something that I will
always remember.
My Vacation
by Erik Mikkelsen (no character page yet)
During the summer I did not do very much. It was my last year at my old
school, so I was sad to say good bye to a lot of my good friends. Right
after school was out, I went with my family up our big river to a family
reunion where I saw many relatives I didn't know I had. It was neat, and
I saw a lot of neat things, like the biggest earth mound north of Mexico
and a very big American Indian painting on the cliffs by the river. I
am really interested in Native American cultures and history. But it was
very rainy, and I became sick, so when we got back home, I couldn't do
anything for a few weeks. Later we went to the Sea and I saw dolphins,
and they were really interesting to watch, but I was only about 20 feet
away from them in the water. They were much bigger than they seemed in
pictures, so I was kind of afraid. I kept thinking about the shark attacks
we have had nearby, and I didn't stay in very long. My cousin was stung
by a jellyfish. Then I said good bye to my best friend, who is going to
another school, and tried to start making friends around here. I made
a lot of mistakes, I guess, but I have made some really good friends too.
All in all I guess it was a great summer after all.
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